Jangofango@lemmy.zip to Asklemmy@lemmy.ml · 12 days agoWriting a short story what should I name my cartelmessage-squaremessage-square33fedilinkarrow-up11arrow-down10file-text
arrow-up11arrow-down1message-squareWriting a short story what should I name my cartelJangofango@lemmy.zip to Asklemmy@lemmy.ml · 12 days agomessage-square33fedilinkfile-text
minus-squareRegularJoe@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·12 days agoI guess it depends on the cartel’s focus. Are they a drug cartel? The Black Orchard — growers, & brewers. The Phantom Crucible — they use experimental chemistry to make their product. A price cartel (where they fix prices)? They would be focused on money. The Thorned Veil — a cartel that hides behind beauty, elegance, and deception. The Broken Halo Network — fallen idealists turned organized criminals. A territorial cartel (where they have regions)? If you do “business” in another region, it might be your last “transaction”. The Crimson Ledger — every wrong and debt is written in blood. The Ashen Wolves — enforcers who leave nothing but ashes of trespassers (or their buildings if they set up shop in the wrong place).
minus-squareCypher45@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·12 days agoBro you really used ChatGPT to post this reply? 😭
minus-squareHelix 🧬@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up0·12 days agoYou can use em dashes yourself — just find out how, use a few big words, and bedazzle your readers!
minus-squareJangofango@lemmy.zipOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·edit-212 days agoI’m thinking something like the cjng , its a call of duty short story. Fan fiction
I guess it depends on the cartel’s focus. Are they a drug cartel?
The Black Orchard — growers, & brewers.
The Phantom Crucible — they use experimental chemistry to make their product.
A price cartel (where they fix prices)? They would be focused on money.
The Thorned Veil — a cartel that hides behind beauty, elegance, and deception.
The Broken Halo Network — fallen idealists turned organized criminals.
A territorial cartel (where they have regions)? If you do “business” in another region, it might be your last “transaction”.
The Crimson Ledger — every wrong and debt is written in blood.
The Ashen Wolves — enforcers who leave nothing but ashes of trespassers (or their buildings if they set up shop in the wrong place).
Bro you really used ChatGPT to post this reply? 😭
You can use em dashes yourself — just find out how, use a few big words, and bedazzle your readers!
I’m thinking something like the cjng , its a call of duty short story. Fan fiction